Heron There & Everywhere

Heading west is rough when the sun goes down.
Bright sun glare catches you right in the eyes.
Traffic heads home as they rush out of town.
Heading west is rough when the sun goes down.
All the cars in your way can make you frown.
Gridlock – sometimes it crawls, sometimes it flies.
Heading west is rough when the sun goes down.
Bright sun glare catches you right in the eyes.

 

The Challenge – http://reowr.wordpress.com/2013/10/16/when-it-breaks-a-triolet-and-challenge/

Instructions on writing a triolet:
There are a total of 8 lines with two different repeating lines:
o The 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat.
o The 2nd and 8th lines repeat.
The rhyme scheme is ABaAabAB. The capital letters represent the repeating lines.
Commonly written with 8 or 10 syllables per line.